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January 26, 2024, 12:32:47 am
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TrueVenom

Seemati
« on: January 26, 2024, 12:32:47 am »
Title : Seemati
Story By : TrueVenom (Guru)
!!!Disclaimer : Its a total fictional story and conversations, anything that relates to reality is purely coincidental.!!!


Chapter 1: Mood Swing
Time : 1:30 AM
!!![Message Beep]!!!
(Karthick wakes up at mid night and checks the phone, one SMS received. He notices the sender name as "Mahalakshmi")
Maha : Hi
Karthi replies : Hey pa, enna indha time'la?
Maha : Hey thoongalaiya nee, udane reply pandra?
Karthi : Illa nan light sleeper dhane adhan, message notification kettu ezhundhuten..
Maha : Hey sorry da, disturb paniten'la..
Karthi : Adhellam onnu illa, Sollu.
Maha : Illa Chumma edho memories.. adhan.. Call pannava?
Karthi : Enna pa aachu.. hmm pannu.
(Maha Calls Karthi.. Karthick Picks)
Maha : (Quick word from her) Unna nan miss panitena da?
(Karthi got no words to respond. For a moment, he got blanked)
Karthi : Yen ipo indha nenapellam? 2 Varsham aachu.
Maha : Nee sollu nan unna miss paniten dhane?
Karthi : Apdilam onnum illa.. Unaku enna pidikala, nan vera over protective, nee enna pannuva?
Maha : Overprotective na nalladhu dhane, yen enaku adhu pidikaama pochu?
Karthi : No No, Protective fine, but over protective and konjam possessive soo...
Maha : Aama'la.. nee over possessive..  Oru paiyan koodavum pesave vida maata, erinju erinju vizhuva..
Karthi : Nan epdi solradhu, nan apdi dhan.. Enaku mattum dha nee apdi, unna yaarukum konjam kooda koduka maten'nu oru thought..
Maha : Un lover nan. apo nan unaku mattum dhane da.. Chumma innoruthan kooda pesina, nan avanuku sondhagagiduvena. loosa da nee?
Karthi : Haha, Maha, idhellam edho namma first time pesra madhiriye pesitrukka.. ellam already pesi mudinjadhu dhane.. :P Nee ipo en lover illa.
Maha : Nee dha enna miss panita, nan onnum unna miss pannala..
Karthi : Aama correct dhan..
Maha : Un thappu dhan..
Karthi : En thappu dhan..  :)
(Silence Again for a while)
Maha : Irukiya?
Karthi : Iruken da..
Karthi: Sorry, iruken ppa..
Maha : Am Sorry.
Karthi : Edhukku?
Maha : Un mela dha thappu'nu solren, aana en mela thappu madhiri dha feel aagudhu.. nan unna miss panita madhiri dha manasu valikudhu.. Yen?
Karthi : Apdilam yosikaadha.. Nee enaku romba romba precious, epodhum. Nan dha unna miss paniten.
Maha : Yarmela mistake?
Karthi : Yarmela mistake'nu aarachi panna iranginadhu dha mistake.
Maha :  :'(
Maha : Nan dhan thappu.. En mela dha thappu..
Karthi : Nee baby.. nee panna edhum thappu illa, unaku pidikala avlo dhan.. free'ah vidu.. idha pathilam  yosichutu irukkaama thoongu.
Maha : Thookam varala, thinking'ahve irukku.. Nee thoongu..
Karthi : Hmm..
Maha : Oru vela, unaku enna pidikalaiya? adhan kalati vitutiya?
Karthi : Maaa... indha topic vendam.. nee mind'ah relax'ah vachukitu thoongu.
Maha : Thoonga poriya?
Karthi : Sollu..
Maha : En kooda call'a apdiye irukiya?
Karthi : Nee andha time'la irukiya?
Maha : Endha time'la?
Karthi : Adhan andha time, monthly time..
Maha : Aama epdi theriyum?
Karthi : Hmm sari, nan call'la iruken, nee apdiye thoongu.
Maha : Epdi theriyum'nu sollu.
Karthi : Unaku mood swing aagudhu adhan keten.
Maha : Hmmm... call cut pannadha..
Karthi : Hmm.. Good night..
Maha : Good night..

After a long time, Karthi listening to maha's moochu kaathu for a while in a night time call and peacefully goes to sleep.

(Thodarum)




January 29, 2024, 01:17:26 pm
Reply #1

RiJiA

Re: Seemati
« Reply #1 on: January 29, 2024, 01:17:26 pm »
NICE👏👏👏  WAITING  FOR NEXT.......

February 03, 2024, 12:06:15 am
Reply #2

karthick sri

Re: Seemati
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2024, 12:06:15 am »
Nice bro :)